Hei guys .. I feel, I should have informed prior to publishing the post . Last night I got emotional after gulping few pegs and the hangover continued till the afternoon. In between the keyboard of the machine kept making noise and ended up producing the things( i dont know what to name these lines) below which you may avoid reading , if you wish to … 🙂 . I cant remove it as its too late and I apologize sincerely for the terrible act of a drunk doodler , in advance 🙂
Go Ahead..All the Best…
Those who can write;give a sarcastic smile.
Surely not all but few with ego, fragile.
Embraced by many, rejected by few
a struggling doodler and a cartoonist,new.
Not old to the blogging world
where they play with words and rhymes.
Where they narrate an entire life,
in few words and few lines.
All I have is praise and praise
and only good words for them..
and appreciations for many who capture places
and click passing-by time, in frame.
Good words for some who talk politics,
evaluate governance and voting statistics.
Less are not, who know the net almost inside out.
Be it google or facebook,they answer each and every doubt.
Talents floating on the internet,
they all know their niche.
Standing amid these talented fellows
is a novice Cartoonist.
Limited vocabulary and limited knowledge
to talk about sky or cow,
to click the beauty of mother nature
or discuss technical know-how.
All I know is to draw few shapes..
resembling human,resembling grapes.
Shapes which speak for the mango people
about life and its narrow escapes.
I thank you all, who accepted me,
with full heart, half and no.
Now, to the few talented and intellectuals
for whom I am a singing crow,
I promise to win your hearts as-well,
give me a chance to grow!
For spreading humor and smiles
that’s what I learnt out of life
and that’s what I try to do..
promoting virus of humor and love.
For I know it spreads like flu.
With Love
Jack(ed) R
Oho! Honing your writing skills? 😛
In the morning I read your poem on Kislaya’s blog, now this one on yours… 😀
hahahaha ..
sharpening a ball never helps !!
Sometimes I test patience of the world .. by portraying a poet … when this post remains silent … for two days .. I will get back to normalcy . 🙂
But thanks dear Sourav for bearing the pain for friendship! 🙂
wow! Nice to see the poet in you 🙂
hahaha !
just felt like irritating you all – my blogger friends ..
😀
Naah, apna paisa to sirf cartoons pe laga hua hai!!!
hahaha 😀 ispe bhi laga dijiye 🙂
Nice Mr. Cartoonist turned Poet. . . 🙂
thanks OJ 🙂
Nice Poem! I like specially the last lines…..”promoting virus of humor and love.
For I know it spreads like flu”.
thank you Rachna my friend 🙂
I summoned up my guts to express in words . Hopefully its readable 🙂
Your welcome! Its wonderful! You really expressed your feelings very nicely.
🙂 I am glad to meet a heart which has space for novice scribbling.. thank you for the motivation 🙂
Nice to meet you too…..I admire those people who genuinely express feelings it doesn’t really matter if a person is novice or professional. Moreover I am also an ordinary blogger who just love to write and read….be it a poem or article.
You can always write more nice poems and I would love to read:)
Happy Blogging
Oh wow! You are one talented person I must say !
Am I ? 🙂
Acknowledged by a narrator of facts,a wonderful writer and cut-throat analyst of latest happenings,I think,I can at least not feel shy that I dared to write something!!
Thank you Naba !
You feedback matters !! Thanks again. 🙂
Good one! 🙂 .. and what was that again? novice? you? no way! 😀
Keep writing .. and doodling 🙂
hehehe 🙂 believe this novice my dear friend!!
Your writing is good too but love your doodles!!
Deepak Bhai ..this was just an attempt of a pony to behave like Horse 😉 the hangover is over .. and I will wear my skin from the next posts onwards 😀
exactly how i feel when i go through some of the wonderful blogs. there are many outstanding blogs which we are not aware of, or we are too preoccupied with driving traffic that we forget to work on the quality of contents.
enjoyed reading this post 🙂
Mine is deteriorating 🙁 .. or should I say it never was that good 🙁
All the doodles failed and what worked are my words ??
to bring that ONE Traffic named Debojyoti ??
Pat my shoulders bro 😀
No, seriously, I promise to improve my content!!
Thank You for sharing your thoughts Humorist No. 1
It Inspires !! Thank You Again 🙂
See you after I come back from Nepal trip. This was good but your doodles are fab!
Hei Mrids this was just a mimicry of lion’s roar by a cat !! I promise I wont make mistakes again 😀
I should do what I am good ok at.. I am getting repeated messages from all my friends including you 🙂
I got the hint 😀
I hope to see Nepal through your lens at the earliest dear friend.
Happy Trip !! 🙂
Arey Dada bhavuk ho gaye aap.. never expected to see this side of you, but this side is pretty great !!! 🙂
hahaha 😀
hoye hoye ..
its human to make mistakes !!
My hangover is over !!
ki bicchiri lagche .. why did I post this ??
But thanks for the appreciations !!
Aar hesho naa..!! 😀 bhoool hotei paare !! 😀
LOL hahaha 😀 … maal kheye ami jaa kori taar kachhe eta kichhui na. This is constructive and good 🙂 .
thank you ..
taayi to por chilam 😀 tomar blog e !! 😀
ahem ahem … someone is becoming a poet too :D:D you are now taking away our bread and butter someone 😛 😛
of course a wonderful read! 🙂 🙂 keep it coming more 🙂
kya Richa !! tumbhi ?? 🙂
hogayi galti boss !!
kal se I will do what i am ok with !!
Last night .. I gulped a poet’s drink… and that was it !!
😀
Hangover is over !!
No more messing around with whatever small reputation I have 😀
madam .. kal se wapas doodle milenge yahan par 😀
Dunno what to say…………… 😐
Modesty thy name is….if this is what a few pegs and hangover do to you then may you please continue in an inebriated state….but oh please stop being so humble and well oh! 🙂 you so reminded me of Captain Haddock…:) 🙂 🙂
BTW since you’re again (incorrigible that you are!) fishing for compliments let me reiterate that you are a powerhouse of talent and storehouse of humour…Aabaar boli beche thako baba!!!!
Holo?
I earned your compliments after a long time..what doodles could not … drunken rhyming did !! Aar ke kelenkari compliment diye cho ..aar ki bolbo ?? hehehe Thanks a ton and more.. for standing by my doodles and my first and last attempt on Rhyming Words 😀
Your Compliments Mean a lot .. and I am sure you know it 🙂 .. its an assurance I am on the track of development and that what I am producing is no ‘habi jhabi’ entirely 🙂
Last? I am disappointed….Habi jabi?…..aabaar? ei chheleta jaalaaley dekhchhi
hehehehe !!
BTW no post these days ? Whats keeping you so preoccupied if I may ask ?or did I miss any ???
Just trying my hand at something serious….Will get back soon…y’ see I’ve no hurry coz except a handful no one’s dying to read what I write…
handful ??? thats lot more in numbers
🙂
well best of luck for whatever you are engrossed into .. 🙂
hope to see your posts soon
Angel of Creativity 🙂
Oh wow! I’m amazed to see the poet in you! I feel you’ve got talent in poetry too, nourish it well from now on 🙂 If you read my initial poem you will think “Did Valli write this nonsense! Omg!?” If this is your initial poem, It is really very good and expressive 🙂
Drawing few shapes, creating a concept and making others smile isn’t that easy! needs lot of imagination and creativity. You are surely not a novice. I don’t feel like that when I see your work. I really love visiting your blog and every time I leave your blog I leave with a smile 🙂 Keep promoting the virus of humor and love and sometimes poetry too 😛
Should I thank you more for appreciating my doodles or for bravely facing my writing attempt ???
A sincere thanks for being supportive and encouraging my attempts!! Matters. A lot Valli .. the poet of love 🙂
Wow! Nice depiction of all kinds of bloggers and your tribute to them. I now know the other dimension of a gem of a doodler which too is sparkling. Please keep doing your good work
Thank You sir !! I always take your comments as blessings for betterment and learning !I thank you for giving ears to my toddler attempts in rhyming words !!
Diversification! Last 2 lines are too good!
naa re !! no diversification and all .. it was just a mistake … 🙂 I may not repeat it again !! I am happy you liked some lines of that drunken mistake !! Thank You for dropping by dear Shaivi 🙂
Now this seems familiar…Attaboy!…now we are talking… 8)
Oh watch out for your steps…look at the way you are walking… :@
No need to worry about…what they think of you…what they do! O:)
Coz those who keep on judging your smile…they are still stranger to you! 😡
Don’t bother about appreciation…don’t weigh your skills for dime… 🙂
You should be happy…Oh boy…you are a doodler who can rhyme!! 😀
Why are you taking so much load? :/
You seem like badly in self-criticizing mode! :O
If your work you say is what a ‘novice’ Cartoonist about… :l
Then you have googled the wrong word for it, I don’t have any doubt 😛
And if this is what a hangover does to you… o.O
Go ahead, repeat last night, find a muse and start writing something new! \m/
Just for your knowledge…those who write…they tend to scale that extra mile… B)
And if they right via their heart…there’s no way they’ll show you a sarcastic smile 😉
Oh dear poetess, your compliments in your style has given me some confidence!! I am overwhelmed,pleased and astonished at the same time..you take no time to write a poem !! Inspiring are these lines !! Motivator big-time !! I wish to keep this poem in my heart as the lines are just for me 🙂 I am grateful to you for this gesture !! Its like an award .. Thank You so so so very much .. !!
You deserved that pal!! N you better stay in the game! 🙂
🙂 thank you poetess 🙂
Super response to a super poet/doodler and don’t know what else!
hehehe
I would agree Mukesh that Kriti , the poetess has made me feel so good dedicating her creations on me..
I am thankful to you as well for those golden words of appreciations however I think I should not have ended up rhyming words and lines. I think I over did it 😀 .. Its
the graceful lot of blogger friends I have got,who are still patting my shoulders!
Thank you dear friend for all your encouragement.
Good Poem! No, simply AWESOME! Keep writing as well as doodling! 🙂
hehehe wise men make mistakes too !! 🙂
but thank you so very much dear Swati for those words of encouragement !!
Hmm…poetry also?
Cool.
Hey, you’re doing a good job with these doodles, really.
I like the very optimistic note you end on. You’re already spreading that funny flu. 🙂
Thank You So very Much !!
Poetry ? Its so generous of you to put those words and sentences in the category , i feel ! I think it was a drunken blunder 🙂
I am so very thankful to you for showering your compliments regarding the doodles. I assure , your words encourage me for spreading the humour flu more rapidly 😀
Thank you for dropping by and sharing your views 🙂
You dark horse…are you writing to give writers and poets a run for their money? X(…really good…I think I should keep an eye on you 😀
hahaha!! Kya Pankti even you ??
Galti se Mistake hogaya .. I know within how horrible I have been and if in sane mind I would have never published this …
however .. I am thankful to you for encouraging me even after I devastated the word called poetry and its meaning 😀
Nitesh, you are taking the humility to the new level….if only all the bloggers were like you, we would have had a better blog-o-sphere
hehehe .. Pankti .. abhi to your pakka pulling my leg !!
😀 😀
thank you but !! it is indeed a good place where co bloggers do not discourage novice scribbling 🙂
Wow. Good to see a poem here. Nice post mysay 🙂 Eloquently written 🙂
🙂 I dont know how to thank you Sushmitha my dear.I assure this is the first and last mistake I have made on this space !! 😀
doodles are better for me 😀
What next? Novels? Then I will have to learn doodling :/
You were always good with words but thanks a ton to your drunken mind we got to see your poetic side. Loved it .
Poetry chharishna.. aaro laykh. 🙂
aiyeto ? hasi pacche na mone .. ?? hehehe
jaani na .. hotaat poetic blunder ki kore hoyegalo !
I thank thee for the guts you showed in reading that thing .. i dont know what should i name it as !! 😀 😀
keep visiting … Namrota … i promise to continue with doodles 😀
Eyi blunder-ta onek aage howa uchit chhilo.
Haanshi paachhe eta bhebe je… it took a few pegs and a hangover to create this 😛
And I had to read the doodler, eto din shudhu chhobi dekhtam ..so couldn’t give up the opportunity of reading the doodler’s mind 😉
As for naming it…ummm… one suggestion.. “Nameless”; kidding 😀
Btw, I am your loyal visitor… toh sheta bolte aar hobena 😉
Thank you for the shower of compliments .. I feel blessed .. truely !!
Nameless ? keno ?
I am thank thee infinite my loyal visitor … aar ami try korbo je i keep upto your expectations always !! 🙂
Nameless ..emnee bolechhi.. seriously nishhna 😀
seriously ?? life is fun !! seriously kenno nebo bondhu ??
someone should keep their child’s name Nameless !! 😀
it would be fun !! hahaha
hahahah 😛
superrrrrrrrr bro
thank You Bhai so very much !! 🙂
It’s nice to know that you are multi-skilled. 🙂 Best wishes and thanks for the “confession”; more thanks for spreading humour…
Thank you sir .. the master of philosophy in real life ..you are an inspiration and your compliments are nitro-boosters in a Pulsar which can challenge a Ducati now 🙂
I mean it.
Thank you so very much for sharing your views on my toddler attempt!!
what other facets of you will we get to see next? a drunken stupor can cause THIS? wow! one shot of whatever u had, for me too then! nice lines man!
Titli , dear friend, all i did was I gulped the leftover drops of alcohol of a poet last to last night after mine was over..
by the time I realized .. it was too late .. and I was infected 😀 😀
the symptoms are on the site as the post !!
Whatever mess it was .. I am so very thankful to you and all my blogger friends who appreciated these novice lines 🙂 Thank you again for sharing your views !!
By now, you must have realized that people loved your drunken moment… Include me in those people… 🙂
Fizz,it feels great to be appreciated by someone whose poems on love always reminds of one’s love in real life !! Thanks for sharing the lovely comment .. Matters !!
I really like your way of thinking, because it’s fresh and open-minded
thanks friend !! I appreciate your motivating compliment 🙂
Very well written 🙂
thanks dear !! 🙂
Next time without gulping pegs. 🙂
sure dear friend !! 🙂
Have heart..you’re doing very well. Keep them coming !!:))
🙂 your approval ensures I am on the right track 🙂
thanks a ton and more Panchali
Ye kya :O
Hum logon ke pate pe kyun laat maar rahe ho bhaiya 🙁
Hamari roti mat cheeno…..itna accha poems likhoge, toh hume kaun puchegaa….. 😛
hahaha Ritesh .. tum bhi mazak ura rahe ho ?? 🙁 🙂
Nai…seriously….it is very good….in fact, you should write that poem on your girl’s birthday…..i dont do poetry that well….you are the better man….and you are a doodler…..sone pe suhaga
oh is it ?? kya style se kalti mara mere bhai 😀
hehehe …
agar mei likha to original likhunga na isliye nahi likhna chahta :
On MY GIRLS BIRTHDAY .. a small poem … 🙁 as Ritesh my friend has given back the responsibility on me
how do i say what i mean to me ?
like a deadly asteroid from the sky..
or the furious shark in the sea..
I hear,u are coming .. i try to flee..
the nation got independence 65 years back..
I am the only one yet to be free.. 🙁 🙁
My god, you are really good….that last line….your defining moment
hehehe .. and declaring the death of relationship with my girl on her birthday .. if i write this 😀
Wow wow Nitesh,I think u should drink quite often and sit near your comp while drinking…. 🙂
hehehee .. 😀
kya bhai tu bhi ?? 😀
Bhai mazak nahi hai…….bahut mast likha hai isliye bol raha hun dear… 🙂
sure na ?? 😀
Arey sure yaar 100% sure…..Agar yakin nahi ho raha hai to bhej du daru…
hahahaha 😀 😀 😀